twistedpuppet's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yak Vision]

Why the watermark?

I usually like things that are completely random, but I just couldn't like this submission. Firstly, the watermark. I understand you probably don't have the cash to spring for a license, but at least find some software that doesn't put a watermark over everything. You had to have reviewed this before uploading it. There's no real excuse for the watermark. You should have seen it on the playback that you should have done after the movie finished rendering. Secondly, the audio is horrible. The droning noise going on in the first part of the movie was just too distracting. Audio of any kind should add to the movie, not take away from it.

[The Tale of Mr. Carter]

Sound quality needs some work

I loved this flash. The story, the animation. All of it was good. The only issue I had was with the voice over. It kept cutting in and out. If you fix that, this will be even better.

[Origin of the Specious]

rather dissapointing

It was far too short. The graphics were nice, but it did nothing to make up for the lack of content.Spend a little more time on writing.

[The Box by Michelle Denz]

Odd, but cool.

It was good. I thought the animation was part of the style, to be honest. I thought that it fit with the art style. I was a little confused at the end though. The inscription said whoever opened the box would wish they never did. The kid opened the box but it was the father who suffered. Why? There were a couple of creatures with in the box that were creepy. If you had done all the creatures like that, it would have been rockin. The face with the weird eyes and the evil eyes were the best part and fit more with the animation and art style than the child drawings of the other creatures. Other than the creatures inside the box, it was awesome.

[That's My Fulp]

blah

Dangit. wrote the review for this in the wrong damn window. X(

Anyway, this sucked. Parody isn't just about taking characters from real life and putting them in a flash. You have to have a good story/joke to go with it. You're lacking seriously in the writing department. Fire your writer.

[Ray - Part 3 Introduction]

It's cool

So when's the real one coming out? I can't wait! I've wishing for another installment for months! :D